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How To Write a Masterpiece of a Resume

This resume guide is an excerpt from our national bestselling book. There
are little ads for us, Rockport Institute, in the text. If you are somewhere
in the process of deciding just what sort work you will be doing in the
future, read them. Otherwise, pass them by.
This
on-line guide presents the basic principles of writing powerful and effective
resumes . It will
not answer all your questions or guide you completely through this complex
subject. It would take a full length book to get across everything important. A
great resume does not necessarily follow the rules that you hear through
the grapevine. It does not have to be one page or follow some special format.
Every resume is a one of a kind communication. It should be appropriate
to your situation and do exactly what you want it to do . Instead
of a bunch of rules and tips, we are going to cut to the chase in this
brief guide and offer you the most basic principles of writing a highly
effective resume.
Who
are we to be telling you how to write your resume? As
part of our career consulting practice, we wrote and produced resumes for
several Fortune 500 C.E.O.s, senior members of the last few presidential
administrations, and leaders in nearly every field of endeavor. We also
wrote resumes for young people just starting out.
We were,
and still are committed to offering the best career services on the planet.
We have not
employed resume writers for several years. If you are trying to decide
what to do with your life, we can help you. That is our one and only specialty.
But please, don't ask us to write your resume. We offer this resume writing
guide to you because most of the resume books out there are so primitive.
This
guide is especially for people looking for a job in the United States.
In the US, the rules of job hunting are much more relaxed than they are
in most of Europe and Asia. You can do a lot more active personal marketing
here. In Europe, Asia as well as those in the US seeking jobs in some professions,
such as law, academia and highly technical engineering and computer fields,
you will have to tone down our advice a few notches and follow the traditional,
conservative format accepted in your field. But even when your presentation
must fit a narrow set of rules, you can still use the principles we will
present to make your presentation more effective than your competition.
Resume Index
If
you are looking for a specific bit of information or answer to a resume
question, please use this index. If you want to learn to write a spectacular
resume, we suggest that you start at the beginning.
To
write a great resume involves facing up to some good news and some bad
news. The good
news is that, with a little extra effort, you can create a resume that
makes you really stand out as a superior candidate for a job you are seeking. Not one resume in a hundred follows the principles that stir the interest
of prospective employers. So, even if you face fierce competition, with
a well written resume you should be invited to interview more often than
many people more qualified than you.
The
bad news is that your present resume is probably much more inadequate than
you now realize. You will have to learn how to think and write in a style
that will be completely new to you.
To understand what I
mean, let's take a look at the purpose of your resume. Why
do you have a resume in the first place? What is it supposed to
do for you?
Here's an imaginary scenario.
You apply for a job that seems absolutely perfect for you. You send your
resume, with a cover letter to the prospective employer. Plenty of other
people think the job sounds great too and apply for the job. A few days
later, the employer is staring at a pile of several hundred resumes. Several
hundred? you ask. Isn't that an inflated number? Not really. A job offer
often attracts between 100 and 1000 resumes these days. So, you are facing
a great deal of competition. OK.
Back to the fantasy and
the prospective employer staring at the huge stack of resumes. This person
isn't any more excited about going through this pile of dry, boring documents
than you would be. But, they have to do it, so they dig in. After
a few minutes, they are getting sleepy. They are not really focusing any
more. Then, they run across your resume. As soon as they start reading
it, they perk up. The more they read, the more interested, awake and turned
on they become.
Most resumes in the pile
have only gotten a quick glance. But yours gets read, from beginning to
end. Then, it gets put on top of the tiny pile of resumes that made the
first cut. These are the people who will be asked in to interview. In this
mini resume writing guide, what we hope to do is to give you the basic
tools to take this out of the realm of fantasy and into your everyday life.
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THE
NUMBER ONE PURPOSE OF A RESUME
The
resume is a tool with one specific purpose: to win an interview. If
it does what the fantasy resume did, it worked. If it doesn't, it isn't
an effective resume. A resume is an advertisement, nothing more, nothing
less.
A great
resume doesn't just tell them what you have done but makes the same assertion
that all good ads do: If you buy this product, you will get these specific,
direct benefits. It
presents you in the best light. It convinces the employer that you have
what it takes to be successful in this new position or career.
It is so pleasing to
the eye that the reader is enticed to pick up and read it. It "whets
the appetite," stimulates interest in meeting you and learning more
about you. It inspires the prospective employer to pick up the phone and
ask you to come in for an interview.
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OTHER POSSIBLE REASONS TO HAVE A RESUME
- To
pass the employer's screening process (requisite
educational level, number years' experience, etc.), to give basic facts
which might favorably influence the employer (companies worked for, political
affiliations, racial minority, etc.). To provide contact information:
an up-to-date address and a telephone number (a telephone number which
will always be answered during business hours).
- To
establish you as a professional person with high standards and
excellent writing skills, based on the fact that the resume is so well
done (clear, well-organized, well-written, well-designed, of the highest
professional grades of printing and paper). For persons in the art, advertising,
marketing, or writing professions, the resume can serve as a sample of
their skills.
- To
give to potential employers, to give to your job-hunting contacts and
professional references, to
provide background information, to give out in "informational interviews" with
the request for a critique (a concrete creative way to cultivate the
support of this new person), to send a contact as an excuse for follow-up
contact, and to keep in your briefcase to give to people you meet casually
- as another form of "business card".
- As
a covering piece or addendum to another form of job application, as
part of a grant or contract proposal, as an accompaniment to graduate
school or other application.
- As
a formality for an employer's personnel files.
- As
a means of helping you in the process of clarifying direction,qualifications, and strengths, as a means of boosting confidence, as
a positive way of starting the commitment to a job or career change.
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WHAT
IT ISN'T
It
is a mistake to think of your resume as a history of your past, as a personal
statement or as some sort of self expression. Sure,
most of the content of any resume is focused on your job history. But,
write from the intention to create interest, to persuade the employer to
call you. If you write with that goal, your final product will be very
different than if you write to inform or catalog your job history.
Most
people write a resume because everyone knows that you have to have one
to get a job. They write their resume grudgingly, to fulfill this obligation.
Writing the resume is only slightly above filling out income tax forms
in the hierarchy of worldly delights. If you realize
that a great resume can be your ticket to getting exactly the job you want,
you may be able to muster some genuine enthusiasm for creating a real masterpiece,
rather than the feeble products most people turn out.
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WHAT
IF I'M NOT SURE OF MY JOB TARGET?
If
you are hunting for a job but are not sure you are on a career path that
is perfect for you, you are making a big and unnecessary compromise. You
are probably going to wind up in something that doesn't really fit you
very well, that you are not really going to enjoy, and that you will, most
likely leave within three years. Doesn't sound like much of a life to me.
How about you? Are you willing to keep putting up with pinning your fate
on the random turnings of the wheel?
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HOW
TO KNOCK THE SOCKS OFF THE
PROSPECTIVE EMPLOYER
Research
has shown that only one interview is granted for every 200 resumes received by
the average employer. Research also tells us that your
resume will be quickly scanned, rather than read. 10 to 20 seconds
is all the time you have to persuade a prospective employer to read further.
What this means is that the decision to interview
a candidate is usually based on an overall first impression of the resume, a quick screening which so impresses the reader and convinces them of the
candidate's qualifications that an interview results. As a result, the
top half of the first page of your resume will either make you or break
you. By the time they have read the first few lines, you have either
caught their interest, or your resume has failed. That is why we say that
your resume is an ad. You hope it will have the same result as a well-written
ad: to get the reader to respond.
To
write an effective resume, you have to learn how to write powerful, but
subtle advertising copy. Not
only that, but you must sell a product in which you have large personal
investment: you. What's worse, given the fact that most of us do not think
in a marketing-oriented way naturally, you are probably not looking forward
to selling anything, let alone yourself. But, if you want to increase your
job hunting effectiveness as much as possible, you would be wise to learn
to write a spectacular resume.
You do not need to hard
sell or make any claims that are not absolutely true. You do need to get
over your modesty and unwillingness to toot your own horn. People
more often buy the best advertised product than they buy the best product.
That is good news if you are willing to learn to create an excellent resume. With
a little extra effort, you will find that you will usually get a better
response from prospective employers than people with better credentials.
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FOCUS
ON THE EMPLOYER'S NEEDS, NOT YOURS
Imagine
that you are the person who will be doing the hiring. This
person is not some anonymous paper pusher deep in the bowels of the personnel
department. Usually, the person who makes the hiring decision is also the
person who is responsible for the bottom line productivity of the project
or group you hope to be a part of. This is a person who cares deeply how
well the job will be done. You need to write your resume to appeal directly
to them.
Ask
yourself: What would make someone the perfect candidate? What special
abilities would this person have? What would set a truly exceptional
candidate apart from a merely good one? What does the employer really
want?
If you are seeking a
job in a field you know well, you probably already know what would make
someone a superior candidate. If you are not sure, you can gather hints
from the help wanted ad you are answering, from asking other people who
work in the same company or the same field. You could even call the prospective
employer and ask them what they want. Don't make wild guesses unless you
have to. It is very important to do this step well. If
you are not addressing their real needs, they will not respond to your
resume.
If you feel slightly
lost at sea in doing this sort of research, watch some old Rockford Files
reruns to learn from the master how to do this kind of creative research.
Putting yourself in the moccasins of the person doing the hiring is the
first, and most important step in writing a resume that markets you rather
than describes your history or herstory. Every step in producing a finished
document should be part of your overall intention to convey to the prospective
employer that you are a truly exceptional candidate.
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PLAN
FIRST
Focus
your writing efforts. Get
clear what the employer is looking for and what you have to offer before
you begin your resume. Write your answers to the above mentioned question, "What
would make someone the perfect candidate?" on notebook paper,
one answer per page. Prioritize the sheets of paper, based on which qualities
or abilities you think would be most important to the person doing the
hiring.
Then, starting with the
top priority page, fill the rest of that page, or as much of it as you
can, with brainstorming about why you are the person who best fulfills
the employer's needs. Write down everything you have ever done that demonstrates
that you fit perfectly with what is wanted and needed by the prospective
employer.
The
whole idea is to loosen up your thinking enough so that you will be able
to see some new connections between what you have done and what the employer
is looking for. You
need not confine yourself to work-related accomplishments. Use your entire
life as the palette to paint with. If Sunday school or your former gang
are the only places you have had a chance to demonstrate your special gift
for teaching and leadership, fine. The point is to cover all possible ways
of thinking about and communicating what do you do well. What are the talents
you bring to the market place? What do you have to offer the prospective
employer?
If
you are making a career change or are a young person and new to the job
market, you are going to have to be especially creative in getting across
what makes you stand out. These brainstorming pages will be the
raw material from which you craft your resume. One important part of
the planning process is to decide which resume format fits your needs
best. Don't automatically assume that a traditional format will work
best for you. More about that later.
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A
GREAT RESUME HAS TWO SECTIONS
In
the first, you make assertions about your abilities, qualities and achievements. You
write powerful, but honest, advertising copy that makes the reader immediately
perk up and realize that you are someone special.
The second
section, the evidence section, is where you back up your assertions with
evidence that you actually did what you said you did. This is where you
list and describe the jobs you have held, your education, etc. This is
all the stuff you are obliged to include.
Most
resumes are just the evidence section, with no assertions. If you have trouble getting to sleep, just read a few resumes each night
just before going to bed. Your troubles will disappear! Nothing puts people
to sleep better than the average resume.
The juice
is in the assertions section.
When a prospective employer finishes reading your resume, you want them
to immediately reach for the phone to invite you in to interview. The resumes
you have written in the past have probably been a gallant effort to inform
the reader. You don't want them informed. You want them interested and
excited.
In fact, it is best to
only hint at some things. Leave the reader wanting more. Leave them with
a bit of mystery. That way, they have even more reason to reach for the
phone. The assertions section usually has two or three sections. In all
of them, your job is to communicate, assert and declare that you are the
best possible candidate for the job and that you are hotter than a picnic
on Mercury.
You
start by naming your intended job. This
may be in a separate "Objective" section, or may be folded into
the second section, the "Summary." If you are making a change
to a new field, or are a young person not fully established in a career,
start with a separate "Objective" section.
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THE
OBJECTIVE
Ideally,
your resume should be pointed toward conveying why you are the perfect
candidate for one specific job or job title. Good
advertising is directed towards a very specific target audience.
When a
car company is trying to sell their inexpensive compact to an older audience,
they show grandpa and grandma stuffing the car with happy, shiny grandchildren
and talk about how safe and economical the car is. When they advertise
the exact same car to the youth market, they show it going around corners
on two wheels, with plenty of drums and power chords thundering in the
background. You want to focus your resume just as specifically.
Targeting
your resume requires that you be absolutely clear about your career direction
or, at least that you appear to be clear. If you aren't clear where you
are going
The way
to demonstrate your clarity of direction or apparent clarity is to have
the first major
topic of your resume be your OBJECTIVE.
Let's look at a real world example.
Suppose the owner of a small software company puts an ad in the paper seeking
an experienced software sales person. A week later they have received 500
resumes. The applicants have a bewildering variety of backgrounds. The
employer has no way of knowing whether any of them are really interested
in selling software.
They remember all the
jobs they applied for that they didn't really want. They know that many
of the resumes they received are
from people who are just using a shotgun approach, casting their seed
to the winds. Then, they come across a resume in the pile that starts with
the following:
"OBJECTIVE - a software
sales position in an organization where an extraordinary record of generating
new accounts, exceeding sales targets and enthusiastic customer relations
would be needed.
This
wakes them up. They are immediately interested. This first sentence conveys
some very important and powerful messages: "I want exactly the job
you are offering. I am a superior candidate because I have the qualities
that are most important to you. I want to make a contribution to your company." This
works well because the employer is smart enough to know that someone who
wants to do exactly what you are offering will be much more likely to succeed
than someone who doesn't. And, will probably be a lot more pleasant to
work with as well.
Secondly, this
candidate has done a good job of establishing why they are the perfect
candidate
in their first sentence. They have thought
about what qualities would make a candidate stand out. They have started
communicating that they are that person immediately. What's more, they
are communicating from the point of view of making a contribution to
the employer.
They
are not writing from a self-centered point of view. Even
when people are savvy enough to have an objective, they often make
the mistake of saying something like, "a position where I can hone my
skill as a scissors sharpener.." or something similar. The employer
is interested in hiring you for what you can do for them, not for fulfilling
your private goals and agenda.
Here's
how to write your objective. First
of all, decide on a specific job title for your objective. Go back to your
list of answers to the question "How
can I demonstrate that I am the perfect candidate?" What are the two
or three qualities, abilities or achievements that would make a candidate
stand out as truly exceptional for that specific job?
The person in the
above example recognized that the prospective employer, being a small,
growing software company, would be very interested in candidates with
an ability to generate new accounts. So, they made that the very first
point
they got across in their resume.
Be sure
the objective is to the point. Do not use fluffy phrases which are obvious
or do not
mean anything, such
as: "allowing the ability to enhance potential and utilize experience
in new challenges." An objective may be broad and still somewhat undefined
in some cases, such as: "a mid-level management position in the
hospitality or entertainment industry."
Remember, your
resume will only get a few seconds attention, at best! You have to generate
interest right away,
in the first sentence they lay their eyes on. Having an objective statement
that really sizzles, is highly effective. And it's simple to
do. One format is:
OBJECTIVE: An xxx position
in an organization where yyy and zzz would be needed.
Xxx
is the name of the position you seek. Yyy and zzz are the most compelling
qualities, abilities or achievements that will really make you stand out
above the crowd of applicants. The research you have previously done, to
find out what is most important to the employer will provide the information
to fill in yyy and zzz.
If
you are not really sure what job you are after, you should adapt your resume
to each type of job you apply for. There is nothing wrong with having several
different resumes, each with a different objective, each specifically crafted
for a different type of position. You may even want to change some parts
of your resume for each job you apply for. Have an objective that is perfectly
matched with the job you are applying for. Remember, you are writing advertising
copy, not your life story.
It is
sometimes appropriate
to include your "Objective" in
your "Summary" section rather than have a separate "Objective"
section. (Examples to follow.) The point of using an "Objective" is
to create a specific psychological response in the mind of the reader.
If you
are making a career change or are a young person, you want the employer
to immediately focus on where you are going, rather than
where you have
been. If you are looking for another job in your present field, it is
more important to stress your qualities, achievements and abilities first.
A
few examples of separate "objective" sections:
- Senior staff position
with a bank that offers the opportunity to utilize my expertise in commercial
real estate lending and strategic management.
- An entry-level position
in the hospitality industry where a background in advertising and public
relations would be needed.
- A position teaching
English as a second language where a special ability to motivate and
communicate effectively with students would be needed.
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THE
SUMMARY
The "summary" or "summary
of qualifications" consists of several concise statements that focus
the reader's attention on the most important qualities, achievements and
abilities you have to offer. Those qualities should be the most compelling
demonstrations of why they should hire you instead of the other candidates. It gives you a brief opportunity to telegraph a few
of your most sterling qualities. It is your one and only chance to attract
and hold their attention,
to get across what is most important, and to entice the employer to keep
reading.
This is the spiciest part of the resume. This may be the only
section fully read by the employer, so it should be very strong and convincing.
The summary is the one place to include professional characteristics (extremely
energetic, a gift for solving complex problems in a fast-paced environment,
a natural salesman, exceptional interpersonal skills, committed to excellence,
etc.) which may be helpful in winning the interview. Gear every word in
the summary to your targeted goal.
How
to write a "Summary"? Go back to your lists that answer the question,
What would make someone the ideal candidate? Look for the qualities the
employer will care about most. Then look at what you wrote about why you
are the perfect person to fill their need. Pick the stuff that best demonstrates
why they should hire you. Assemble it into your summary section.
The most
common ingredients of a well-written summary are as follows. Of course,
you would not use all these ingredients in one "Summary." Use
the ones that highlight you best.
- A short phrase describing
your profession
- Followed by a statement
of broad or specialized expertise
- Followed by two or
three additional statements related to any of the following:
- breadth or depth
of skills
- unique mix of
skills
- range of environments
in which you have experience
- a special or
well-documented accomplishment
- a history of
awards, promotions, or superior performance commendations
- One or more professional
or appropriate personal characteristics
- A sentence describing
professional objective or interest.
Notice
that the examples below show how to include your objective in the "summary" section.
If you are making a career change, your summary section should show how
what you have done in the past prepares you to do what you seek to do in
the future. If you are a young person new to the job market, your "summary" will
be based more on ability than experience.
A few
examples of "summary" sections:
- Highly motivated,
creative and versatile real estate executive with seven years of experience
in property acquisition, development and construction, as well as the
management of large apartment complexes. Especially skilled at building
effective, productive working relationships with clients and staff. Excellent
management, negotiation and public relations skills. Seeking a challenging
management position in the real estate field that offers extensive contact
with the public.
- Over 10 years as an
organizational catalyst/training design consultant with a track record
of producing extraordinary results for more than 20 national and community
based organizations. A commitment to human development and community
service. Energetic self-starter with excellent analytical, organizational,
and creative skills.
- Financial Management
Executive with nearly ten years of experience in banking and international
trade, finance, investments and economic policy. Innovative in structuring
credit enhancement for corporate and municipal financing. Skilled negotiator
with strong management, sales and marketing background. Areas of expertise
include (a bulleted list would follow this paragraph.)
- Health Care Professional
experienced in management, program development and policy making in the
United States as well as in several developing countries. Expertise in
emergency medical services. A talent for analyzing problems, developing
and simplifying procedures, and finding innovative solutions. Proven
ability to motivate and work effectively with persons from other cultures
and all walks of life. Skilled in working within a foreign environment
with limited resources.
- Commander - Chief
Executive Officer of the US Navy, Atlantic Fleet. Expertise in all areas
of management, with a proven record of unprecedented accomplishment.
History of the highest naval awards and rapid promotion. Proven senior-level
experience in executive decision-making, policy direction, strategic
business planning, Congressional relations, financial and personnel management,
research and development, and aerospace engineering. Extensive knowledge
of government military requirements in systems and equipment. Committed
to the highest levels of professional and personal excellence.
- Performing artist
with a rich baritone voice and unusual range, specializing in classical,
spiritual, gospel and rap music. Featured soloist for two nationally
televised events. Accomplished pianist. Extensive performance experience
includes television, concert tours and club acts. Available for commercial
recording and live performances.
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SKILLS
AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS
In
this final part of the assertions section of your resume, you go into more
detail. You are still writing to enroll the reader, not to inform them.
Basically, you do exactly what you did in the previous section, except
that you go into more detail.
In the summary, you focused
on your most special highlights. Now you tell the rest of best of your
story. Let
them know what results you produced, what happened as a result of your
efforts,
what you are especially gifted or experienced at doing. Flesh
out the most important highlights in your summary.
You
are still writing to do what every good advertisement does, communicating
the following: if you buy this product, you will get these direct benefits. If it doesn't contribute to furthering this communication, don't bother
to say it. Remember, not too much detail. Preserve a bit of mystery. Don't
tell them everything.
Sometimes
the "Skills and Accomplishments" sections is a separate section. In a chronological resume, it becomes the first few phrases of the descriptions
of the various jobs you have held. We will cover that in a few minutes,
when we discuss the different types of resumes. When it is a separate section,
it can have several possible titles, depending on your situation:
- SKILLS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- SUMMARY OF ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- RECENT ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- AREAS OF ACCOMPLISHMENT
AND EXPERIENCE
- AREAS OF EXPERTISE
- CAREER HIGHLIGHTS
- PROFESSIONAL HIGHLIGHTS
- ADDITIONAL SKILLS
AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS
There
are a number of different ways to structure "Skills and Accomplishments" sections. In all of these styles, put your skills and accomplishments in order of
importance for the desired career goal. If you have many skills, the last
skill paragraph might be called "Additional Skills".
Here
are a few ways you could structure your skills and accomplishments section:
1. A listing of skills
or accomplishments or a combination of both, with bullets
Example:
SELECTED SKILLS AND
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- Raised $1900 in 21
days in canvassing and advocacy on environmental, health and consumer
issues.
- Conducted legal research
for four Assistant US Attorneys, for the US Attorney's office
- Coordinated Board
of Directors and Community Advisory Board of community mental health
center. Later commended as "the best thing that ever happened to
that job."
2. A listing of major
skill headings with accomplishments under each. The accomplishments can
be a bulleted list or in paragraph form. The material under the headings
should include mention of accomplishments which prove each skill.
Example:
SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS
National Training
Project / Conference Management.
- Director of "Outreach
on Hunger", a national public education/training project funded
by USAID, foundations and all the major church denominations - Designed,
managed and promoted 3-day training conferences in cities throughout
the US - Planned and managed 32 nationwide training seminars and a 5-day
annual conference for university vice-presidents and business executives.
Program Design: Universities.
- Invited by Duke University
President Terry Sanford to develop new directions and programs for the
University's Office of Summer Educational Programs, first Director of
Duke's "Pre-college Program", first editor of "Summer
at Duke". Designed and successfully proposed a center for the study
of creativity at The George Washington University.
3. A list of bulleted
accomplishments or skill paragraphs under each job (in a chronological
resume).
Example:
Director of Sales
and Marketing
DELAWARE TRADE INTERNATIONAL,
INC. Wilmington, DE
- Promoted from Sales
Representative within one year of joining company to Director of Sales
and Marketing. Responsible for international sales of raw materials,
as well as printing and graphic arts equipment. Oversaw five sales managers.
Was in charge of direct sales and marketing in 17 countries throughout
Europe and the Middle East.
- Recruited, trained
and managed sales staff. Developed marketing strategy, prepared sales
projections and established quotas. Selected and contracted with overseas
sub-agents to achieve international market penetration.
- Negotiated and finalized
long-term contractual agreements with suppliers on behalf of clients.
Oversaw all aspects of transactions, including letters of credit, international
financing, preparation of import/export documentation, and shipping/freight
forwarding.
- Planned and administered
sales and marketing budget, and maintained sole profit/loss responsibility.
Within first year, doubled company's revenues, and produced $7-9 million
in annual sales during the next eight years.
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EVIDENCE
There
isn't really a section on a resume called evidence. By
evidence, we mean all the mandatory information you must include on your
resume: chronological
work history with dates, education, affiliations, list of software mastered,
etc. All this stuff is best placed in the second half of the resume. Put
the hot stuff in the beginning, and all this less exciting information
afterward. It gives the employer the details about where you worked,
how long, your education, etc.
We divided
the resume into a "hot" assertions section, and a more staid "evidence" section
for the sake of communicating that a great resume is not information
but advertising.
A great resume has no evidence section.
It is all one big assertions section.In other words, every
single word is crafted to have the desired effect, to get them to pick
up the phone and call you. It is
all one big ad disguised as a history of your working life. The decisions
you make on what information to emphasize and what to de-emphasize
should be based on considering every word of your resume to be an important
part
of the assertions section. The evidence includes some or all of the
following sections:
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EXPERIENCE
List
jobs in reverse chronological order. Don't go into detail on the jobs early
in your career; focus on the most recent and/or relevant jobs. (Summarize
a number of the earliest jobs in one line or very short paragraph, or list
only the bare facts with no position description.) Decide which is, overall,
more impressive: your job titles or the names of the firms you worked for;
then consistently begin with the more impressive of the two, perhaps using
boldface type.
You
may want to describe the firm in a phrase in parentheses if this will impress
the reader. Put dates in italics at the end of the job, to de-emphasize
them; don't include months, unless the job was held less than a year. Include
military service, internships, and major volunteer roles if desired; because
the section is labeled "Experience. " It does not mean that you
were paid.
Other
headings: "Professional History", "Professional Experience",
not "Employment" or "Work History", both which sound
more lower-level.
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EDUCATION
List
education in reverse chronological order, degrees or licenses first, followed
by certificates and advanced training. Set degrees apart so they are easily
seen. Put in boldface whatever will be most impressive. Don't include any
details about college except major and awards, unless you are still in
college or just recently graduated. Include grade point average only if
over 3.4. List selected course work if this will help convince the reader
of your qualifications for the targeted job.
Do
include advanced training, but be selective with the information, summarizing
the information and including only what will be impressive for the reader.
No
degree received yet? If you are working on an uncompleted degree, include
the degree and in afterwards, parentheses the expected date of completion
(expected 200x).
If
you didn't finish college, start with a phrase describing the field studied,
then the school, then the dates (the fact that there was no degree may
be missed).
Other
headings might be "Education and Training", "Education and
Licenses", "Legal Education / Undergraduate Education" (for
attorneys).
AWARDS
If
the only awards received were in school, put these under the Education
section. Mention what the award was for if you can (or just "for outstanding
accomplishment" or "outstanding performance"). This section
is almost a must, if you have received awards. If you have received commendations
or praise from some very senior source, you could call this section, "Awards
and Commendations." In that case, go ahead and quote the source.
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PROFESSIONAL
AFFILIATIONS
Include
only those that are current and will be relevant and impressive. Include
leadership roles if appropriate. This is a good section to include to get
across your status as a member of a minority targeted for special consideration
by employers, if there is an association membership to show it and this
would be helpful in hiring and otherwise unclear on the resume.
This
section can be combined with "Civic / Community Leadership" as "Professional
and Community Memberships".
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CIVIC
/ COMMUNITY LEADERSHIP
This
is good to include if the leadership roles or accomplishments are related
to the job target and can show skills acquired, for example: a loan officer
hoping to become a financial investment counselor who was Financial Manager
of a community organization charged with investing its funds. Any Board
of Directors membership or "chairmanship" would be good to include.
Be careful with political affiliations, as they could be a plus or minus
with an employer or company.
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PUBLICATIONS
Include only if published. Summarize if there are many.
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COMMENTS
FROM SUPERVISORS
Include
only if very exceptional. Heavily edit for key phrases.
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PERSONAL
INTERESTS
Advantages:
Can indicate a skill or area or knowledge which is related to the goal,
such as Photography for someone in public relations, Carpentry and Wood-working,
for someone in Construction Management, or Sub-Saharan Pre-Paleolithic
African Art, for someone in Nuclear Weapon Research or Bartending. Can
show well-roundedness, good physical health, or knowledge of a subject
related to the goal. Can create common ground or spark conversation in
an interview.
Disadvantages:
Are usually irrelevant to the job goal and resume purpose, and may be meaningless
or an interview turn off ("TV and Reading", "Fund raising
for the Hell's Angels").
You
probably should not include a personal interests section. Your reason for
including it is most likely that you want to tell them about you. But,
as you know, this is an ad. If this section would powerfully move the employer
to understand why you would be the best candidate, include it, otherwise,
forget about it.
May
also be called "Interests and Hobbies", or just "Interests".
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You
may put "References available upon request" at the end of your
resume, if you wish. This is a standard close (centered at bottom in italics),
but is not necessary - is usually assumed. Do not include actual names
of references. A references list can be done as a separate sheet and brought
to the interview to be given to the employer if requested.
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FEW GUIDELINES FOR A BETTER PRESENTATION
Visually
enticing - a work of art . Simple clean structure. Very easy
to read. Symmetrical. Balanced. Uncrowded. As much white space between
sections of writing as possible; sections of writing which are no longer
than six lines, and shorter if possible.
Maximum use of italics,
capital letters, bullets, boldface, and underlining, with uniformity and
consistency.
Absolute parallelism in design decisions, for example: if a period
is at the end of one job's dates, a period should be at the end of
all jobs' dates; if a degree is in boldface, all degrees should be
in boldface.
As
mentioned above, the resume's first impression is most important. It should
be exceptionally visually appealing, to be inviting to the reader. Remember
to think of the resume as an advertisement.
Absolutely
no errors. No typographical errors. No spelling errors.
No grammar, syntax, or punctuation errors. No errors of fact.
All
the basic, expected information is included. A resume must
have the following key information: your name, address, and phone number,
(immediately identifiable and at the top of the first page), a listing
of jobs held, in reverse chronological order, educational degrees including
the highest degree received, in reverse chronological order. Additional,
targeted information will of course accompany this. Much of the information
people commonly put on a resume can be omitted but these basics are
mandatory.
Jobs
listed should include a title, the name of the firm, the city and state
of the firm, and the years.Jobs
earlier in a career can be summarized, or omitted if prior to the highest
degree, and extra
part-time jobs can be omitted. If no educational
degrees have been completed, it is still expected to include some mention
of
education
(professional study or training, partial study toward a degree, etc.)
acquired after high school.
It
is targeted. A resume should be targeted to your goal -
to the ideal next step in your career. First you should get clear what
your job goal is, what the ideal position or positions would be. Then,
you should figure out what key skills, areas of expertise or knowledge,
or body of experience the employer will be looking for in the candidate.
Then, gear the resume structure and inclusions around this target,
proving these key qualifications. If you have no clear goal, take the
skills (or knowledge) you most enjoy or would like to use or develop
in your next career step and build the resume around these.
Strengths
are highlighted / weaknesses de-emphasized. Focus on whatever
is strongest and most impressive. Make careful and strategic choices
as to how to organize, order, and convey your skills and background.
Consider: whether to include the information at all, placement in overall
structure of the resume, location on the page itself or within a section,
ordering of information, more impressive ways of phrasing the information,
use of design elements (such as boldface to highlight, italics to minimize,
ample surrounding space to draw the eye to certain things).
An
initial focus. A resume needs an initial focus created to
help the reader. The reader will not want to read through every word
in order to figure out what your profession is, and what you can do.
Think of the resume as an essay with a title and a summative opening
sentence. An initial focus may be as simple as the name of your profession
("Commercial Real Estate Agent", "Resume Writer")
centered under the name and address; it may be in the form of an objective;
it may be in the form of a summary statement or, better, a summary
statement beginning with a phrase identifying your profession.
Liberal
use of power
words. For
every skill, accomplishment, or job described, use the most active
impressive verb you can think of (which is also
accurate). Begin the sentence with this verb, except when you must
vary the sentence structure to avoid repetitious writing.
GO TO A LIST OF POWER WORDS
Results-oriented. Wherever
possible, prove that you have the desired qualifications through clear
strong statement of accomplishments, rather than a statement of potentials,
talents, or responsibilities. Indicate results of work done, and quantify
these accomplishments, whenever appropriate. For example: "Initiated
and directed complete automation of the Personnel Department, resulting
in time-cost savings of over 25%." Additionally, preface skill and
experience statements with the adjectives "proven" and "demonstrated" to
create this results-orientation.
Writing
that is concise and to the point. Keep sentences as short
and direct as possible. Eliminate any extraneous information and any
repetitions. Don't use three examples when one will suffice. Say what
you want to say in the most direct words possible, rather than trying
to impress with bigger words or more complex sentences. For example: "coordinated
eight city-wide fund raising events, raising 250% more than expected
goal" rather than "was involved in the coordination of six
fund raising dinners and two fund raising walkathons which attracted
participants throughout St. Louis and were so extremely successful
that they raised $5,000 (well beyond the $2,000 goal)".
Vary
long sentences (if these are really necessary) with short punchy sentences. Use
phrases rather than full sentences when phrases are possible, and start
sentences with verbs, eliminating pronouns ("I", "he" or "she").
Vary words - don't repeat a verb or adjective twice in the same writing "block" or
paragraph. Use commas liberally, to clarify meaning and make reading
easier. Remain consistent in writing decisions, for example, use of
abbreviations and capitalizations.
Production. Use a laser printer or another printer
that produces high quality results. It should look typeset. Do not compromise.
Do not use a dot matrix printer unless you are applying for a burger flipping
job. Your resume will look pathetic next to ones that have a typeset appearance.
Use a standard conservative typeface (font) in 10 or 11 point. Produced
to the sharpest printing quality - no faded or broken letters; Off-white
/ cream or bright white 8 1/2 x 11 inch paper, in the highest quality affordable.
If you are applying for a senior-level position, use Crane's paper. An
absolutely clean paper - no smudges. No staples. Generous border. Don't
have your resume look like you sqwuz too much on the page.
Length. Everyone freely gives advice on resume length.
Most of these self-declared experts say a resume should always be one page.
That makes no more sense than it does to say an ad or a poem should automatically
be one page. Your resume can be 500 pages long if you can keep the reader's
undivided attention and interest that long, and at the same time create
a psychological excitement that leads prospective employers to pick up
the phone and call you when they finish your weighty tome. Don't blindly
follow rules! Do what works. Sometimes it is appropriate to have a three
pager. But, unless your life has been filled with a wide assortment of
extraordinary achievements, make it shorter. One page is best, if you can
cram it all into one page. Most Fortune 500 C.E.O.s have a one- or two-page
resume. It could be said that, the larger your accomplishments, the easier
to communicate them in few words. Look to others in your profession to
see if there is an established agreement about resume length in your field.
The only useful rule is to not write one more word than you need to get
them to pick up the phone and call you. Don't bore them with the details.
Leave them wanting more.
Length
of consulting resumes. In a consulting resume, you are expected
to shovel it as deep as you possibly can. If you are selling your own
consulting services, make it sizzle, just like any other resume, but
include a little more detail, such as a list of well-known clients,
powerful quotes from former clients about how fantastic you are, etc.
If you are seeking a job with a consulting firm that will be packaging
you along with others as part of a proposal, get out your biggest shovel
and go to town. Include everything except the name of your goldfish.
A full list of publications, skills, assignments, other experience,
and every bit of educational crapola as you can manage to make sound
like it has something to do with your work. The philosophy here is:
more is better.
Verb
person and tense. Resumes can be written using either the
first or the third person verb tense. Use whichever you choose consistently.
Verb tenses are varied and based on accurate reporting; If the accomplishment
is completed it should be past tense. If the task is still underway,
it should be present tense. If the skill is something which has been
used and will continue to be used, use present tense ("conduct
presentations on member recruitment to professional and trade associations").
A way of "smoothing out" transitions is to use the past continuous
("have conducted over 20 presentations...").
No
lengthy blocks of writing. A good rule is to have no more
than 6 lines of writing in any one writing "block" or paragraph
(summary, skill section, accomplishment statement, job description,
etc.). If any more than this is necessary, start a new section or a
new paragraph.
Ordering
of experience and education sections. Experience sections
should come first, before education, in most every case. This is because
you have more qualifications developed from your experience than from
your education. The exceptions would be 1) if you have just received
or are completing a degree in a new professional field, if this new
degree study proves stronger qualifications than does your work experience,
2) lawyers, who have the peculiar professional tradition of listing
their law degrees first, 3) an undergraduate student, or 4) someone
who has just completed a particularly impressive degree from a particularly
impressive school, even if they are staying in the same field, for
example, a MBA from Harvard.
Telephone
numbers. Be sure the telephone number on the resume will,
without exception, be answered by a person or an answering machine
Monday through Friday 8-5pm. You do not want to lose the prize interview
merely because there was no answer to your phone, and the caller gave
up. Include the area code of the telephone number. If you don't have
an answering machine, get one. Include e-mail and fax numbers, if you
have them.
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FEW MORE TIPS
Try
not to include anything on the resume which could turn the employer off,
anything which is controversial (political, etc.) or could be taken in
a negative light.
Put
most important information on the first line of a writing "block" or
paragraph - the first line is read most.
Use
bold caps for the name on page one. Put your name at the top of page two,
on a two-page resume. Put section headings, skill headings, titles or companies
(if impressive), degrees, and school name (if impressive), in boldface.
Spell
out numbers under and including 10; use numerical form for numbers over
and including 11 (as a general rule). Spell out abbreviations unless they
are unquestioningly obvious.
If
you are not sure what sort of job you are looking for, you will, most likely
wind up in something that turns out to be not much more than just a "job".
In a "job" you exchange a chunk of your life for money. It is
possible to choose a career that will fit you so well that you do it because
you like to go to work. At Rockport Institute we offer career counseling,
coaching and testing programs for people committed to choosing a career
direction for a lifetime of satisfaction and success. Our services, available
worldwide and consistently commended for excellence since 1981, are for
people who realize that choosing your career direction is one of the most
important decisions they will ever make. Our clients are intelligent, complex
people who realize that the way most people go about making career decisions
is insufficient for the task of choosing a vocation that will fit them
well. Many of them realize that traditional career counseling services
are too primitive to be of much help . We also provide advanced training
in highly effective career coaching methods to career development professionals,
guidance counselors, psychologists and human resources specialists.
» More info on Rockport career decision-making services!
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WHAT
NOT TO PUT ON A RESUME
- The word "Resume" at
the top of the resume
- Fluffy rambling "objective" statements
- Salary information
- Full addresses and
zip codes of former employers
- Reasons for leaving
jobs
- A "Personal" section,
or personal statistics (except in special cases)
- Names of supervisors
- References
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ACCURACY/
HONESTY/STRETCHING THE TRUTH
Make
sure that you can back up what you say. Keep the claims you make within
the range of your own integrity. There is nothing wrong with pumping things
up in your resume so you communicate who you are and what you can do at
your very best. Did you ever see an ad that didn't pump up the features
they hope will convince you to buy? In fact, you are being foolish if you
seek to convey a careful, balanced portrayal of yourself. You want to knock
their socks off!
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WHAT
IF I HAVE NOT PERFORMED BRILLIANTLY?
If
you are not really exceptional at doing this job or at least potentially
exceptional but inexperienced, maybe you are applying for the wrong job.
Why would anyone want to spend their days doing something they did not
excel at and didn't really enjoy? Push the underlined text below and your
computer will waft you off to a Rockport Institute web page that tells
you about our programs and services for people who do not want to spend
their life as a career zombie, stuck in a boring, lifeless job where each
day you wish you were somewhere else.
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QUESTIONS
A PRO WOULD ASK YOU
What
key qualifications will the employer be looking for?
What
qualifications will be most important to them that you possess?
Which
of these are your greatest strengths?
What
are the highlights of your career to date that should be emphasized?
What
should be de-emphasized?
What
things about you and your background make you stand out?
What
are your strongest areas of skill and expertise? Knowledge? Experience?
What
are some other skills you possess - perhaps more auxiliary skills?
What
are characteristics you possess which make you a strong candidate - things
like "innovative, hard-working, strong interpersonal skills, ability
to handle multiple projects simultaneously under tight deadlines"
What
are the 3 or 4 things you feel have been your greatest accomplishments?
What
was produced as a result of your greatest accomplishments?
Can you
quantify the results you produced in numerical or other specific terms?
What
were the 2 or 3 accomplishments of that particular job?
What
were the key skills you used in that job - what did you do in each of those
skill areas?
What
sort of results are particularly impressive to people in your field?
What
results have you produced in these areas?
What
are the "buzz words" that people in your field expect you to
use in lieu of a secret club handshake, that should be included in your
resume?
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BASIC
RESUME FORMATS
There
are three basic types of resumes: Chronological, Functional, and "combined" Chronological
- Functional. To see what these styles look like, get a resume book. They
are usually terrible guides for how to write an excellent resume, but they
are good to see different formats. We would love to show you what complete
resumes look like but your web browser would probably do unspeakable things
to the formatting.
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CHRONOLOGICAL
The
chronological resume is the more traditional structure for a resume. The
Experience section is the focus of the resume; each job (or the last several
jobs) is described in some detail and there is no major section of skills
or accomplishments at the beginning of the resume. This structure is primarily
used when you are staying in the same profession, in the same type of work,
particularly in very conservative fields. It is also used in certain fields
such as law and academia. It is recommended that the chronological resume
always have an objective or summary, to focus the reader.
The
advantages: May appeal to older more traditional readers and be best in
very conservative fields. Makes it easier to understand what you did in
what job. May help the name of the employer stand out more, if this is
impressive. The disadvantage is that it is much more
difficult to highlight what you do best. This format is rarely appropriate for someone making
a career change.
FUNCTIONAL
The
functional resume highlights your major skills and accomplishments from
the very beginning. It helps the reader see clearly what you can do for
them, rather than having to read through the job descriptions to find out. It helps target the resume into a new direction or
field, by lifting up from all past jobs the key skills and qualifications
to help prove you
will be successful in this new direction or field. Actual company names
and positions are in a subordinate position, with no description under
each. There are many different types of formats for functional resumes.
The functional resume is a must for career changers, but is very appropriate
for generalists, for those with spotty or divergent careers, for those
with a wide range of skills in their given profession, for students, for
military officers, for returning homemakers, and for those who want to
make slight shifts in their career direction.
Advantages:
It will help you most in reaching for a new goal or direction. It is a
very effective type of resume, and is highly recommended. The disadvantages
are that it is hard to know what the client did in which job, which may
be a negative to some conservative interviewers.
COMBINED
A combined
resume includes elements of both the chronological and functional formats. It may be a shorter chronology of job descriptions preceded by a short "Skills
and Accomplishments" section (or with a longer Summary including a
skills list or a list of "qualifications"); or, it may be a standard
functional resume with the accomplishments under headings of different
jobs held.
There
are obvious advantages to this combined approach. It maximizes the advantages
of both kinds of resumes, avoiding potential "turn-off" of either
type. One disadvantage is that they tend to be longer resumes. Another
is that they can tend to be repetitious - accomplishments and skills may
have to be repeated in both the "functional" section and the "chronological" job
descriptions.
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I'M
NOT SURE I'M EXTRAORDINARY AT ANYTHING
You
have a bigger problem than simply writing your resume. Anyone who has this
concern has done a less than perfect job of choosing their career direction.
Let's take a look at your situation from a new point of view. What an employer
pays you for is to perform some special function or functions. Everything
one might do at work, from flipping burgers to understanding the most obscure
abstract data, is a specific work function. Most careers involve combining
a few different functions together. Everyone is born with a certain degree
of talent for each of the hundreds of possible work functions. Think about
it for a minute. Notice that there are some things that seem to come easily
to you and others that are much more difficult to deal with. Your innate
talent for any specific function may be 100% or only 1%. Almost every person
is naturally good at some things, pretty good at some others, and not so
good at yet other functions. Those people who are very successful, who
have no trouble writing a powerful and sincere resume are people who have
discovered what they are naturally good at. It is as simple as that. If
you uncover your natural talents and pick a job that combines them well,
you will greatly increase the odds that you will wind up both very satisfied
and very successful in your work. Then, you can easily write a resume that
honestly communicates that you are the best candidate for the job - because
you know you are. The way to make this happen is to get some expert coaching
in picking a career that fits you well. To find out more about Rockport
Institute's Pathfinder Career Coaching programs, keep on reading this page.
You will find links to various web pages.
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Rockport provides career counseling, coaching,
life planning and leading edge career testing services for people seeking
a career change leading to increased career satisfaction and success as
well as for younger people making an original career choice.
Our services are available
worldwide and have been consistently commended for excellence since 1981.
They are for career changers and others who want to pick a new career direction
that is not a compromise; who realize that the choices they make as they change
to a new career will be some of the most important decisions they will ever
make.
Our clients are intelligent, complex people who want to wake up in the morning
looking forward to going to work, who realize that the way most people go about
the career choice process is insufficient. Some of them know from first hand
experience that traditional career counseling methods are too primitive to
be of much help.
If you are asking yourself any of the following questions, we invite you to come
in and look around.
Where
am I going with my life?
What
careers would best fit my talents and personality?
Can
I find a career that fits me perfectly,involves
work I care about, is realistic and attainable?
Begin exploring new possibilities, discover Rockport
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Results?
Here are
a few quotes from client letters
that provide
a sense of what you can achieve. Complete versions
of these letters and many others are available. If you would like to have
a copy of our "Letters From Clients" publication please let us
know.
"I
just can't thank you enough for
the exciting changes your Career Choice Program (has) brought to
my life."
"I
am much happier and earning much more than I was."
"The Career Choice program greatly exceeded my expectations."
"Tremendous effect...on my business and personal life."
"This
was a definite turning point in my life."
"After
several years of indecision, the program empowered me to make
a specific career choice."
"I
needed a 180 degree shift and the Rockport Institute turned me in
the right direction." "Expert guidance"
"I
am eagerly looking forward to doing something with my life that
really feels right for me."
"Your
genuine personal interest...helped me to make these changes. Never
before has anyone believed in me so much."
"Thank you for
turning my life around!"
"The
counseling sessions enabled me, step by step, to choose the one career
and begin doing it."
"Most
of all, thank you for my power to decide, commit and act."I
wish I had done this 25 years ago!" "...has helped
me to choose to change my entire life--in a positive direction."
"I
was so pleased with the results of the program that I convinced my husband
and several friends to also take the program. All of them have been
equally satisfied."
"I...warmly
recommend the Rockport Institute to anyone who has a desire to make
a career change or improve their present employment."
"I
was hoping for a miracle. I got one."
"Many
of the apprehensions about going into a new position have been eliminated."
"I
believe that the process at Rockport is a very successful way to face
these issues, realize that one is not alone, and put what appears
to be a crisis situation back into perspective. Only in that way can
one begin to take action."
"In
my case, it did me a great deal of good to discover that many of my natural
instincts in terms of career choice had been good all along; I just hadn't
had the self-confidence to trust them and move ahead."
"The usefulness
of my...program with Rockport continues to be apparent almost
every day and the results have been extraordinary."
"Very
excited about this new career direction.."
"Since
the program, the doubts which can be so immobilizing are gone, and
now I know exactly what I'm going to do."
Rockport also
provides advanced training to career consulting professionals, psychologists
and human resources specialists. |